Friday 28 February 2014

Definition Of Life

What is Life ??
A Feeling of Happiness
A Meaning of Liveliness

 What is Life ??
A Bond of Love
A Rose of Blood

 What is Life ??
A Sorrow of Tear
A Sadness of Pear

 What is Life ??
A Friendship of Flowers
A Heart of Lovers

 What is Life ??
A Book of Knowledge
A Fruit of Acknowledge

 What is Life ??
A Barbarous of our Deeds
An Omni-gatherm of our Dreams

 What is Life ??
A Compendium of our Decisions
An Accuracy of our Precisions

 What is Life ??
A Sea of Emotions
A Rain of Scintillation

 What is Life ??
A Loyalty of our Soul
A Hope of glittering Bowl

 What is Life ??
A Ray of Dishes
A Pray of Wishes

 What is Life ??
A Waterfall of Gold
A Blessing of God


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8 comments:

  1. Unknown28 February 2014 at 08:18

    Nice...full of reality....

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    1. Shreya Jain28 February 2014 at 08:20

      Thank you Mam :)
      and thanks for visiting my blog everyday :) . I am truly happy that you have liked my poems :)

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  2. Unknown28 February 2014 at 09:13

    Nice poem...

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    1. Shreya Jain28 February 2014 at 11:09

      thnk u Sir :)
      and thanks for reading my poems :)

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  3. Unknown28 February 2014 at 21:33

    Impressive :)

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  4. Binod Mairta3 March 2014 at 02:31

    This is really a good poem. I read your other poems too. If you don't mind, I would suggest you to avoid general statements while writing poems. Otherwise, you write with flow and rhythm. Keep it up.

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    1. Shreya Jain3 March 2014 at 02:48

      Thank you Sir. I really appreciate your interest in my poems :)
      Sir but plz can you elaborate 'general statements' in my poems.. an example... so that I will take care from the next time :)

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